Nowadays families move to different countries for work. Some people think it has a negative effect on children, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is widely acknowledged that working in a foreign country has an effect on
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child
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development. Despite
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negative belief,
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totally agree that
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children can improve new survival
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for their future lives.
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essay aims to discuss both
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and will provide supporting examples to arrive at
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reasonable conclusion.
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