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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates
about
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how much has been spent on
books
 in four countries from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
, there was a notable trend that Germany has been
dominanted
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dominated
 the top country
of
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 the
consumtion
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consumption
in
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books
 over the period,
while
 France , Italy and
Austria
also
 increased their cost after ten years. Looking at the details, in 1995, Germany was the highest country in money spent on
books
 with 80
millions
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, it was almost 20
percent
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 higher than France and Italy, and 50
percent
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 bigger than
Austria
.
Moreover
Austrian
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Austria
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 was the lowest consumers in the first year of the report. When we look at the
peiod
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period
 from 1999 to 2003, it has been
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 that Germany has a slight
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, with approximately 5
percent
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. Contrastly, there was a remarkable increase in
Austria
. In the
last
 year of the report, the cost of
books
 in all regions
grewth
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growth
grew
 significantly. The most
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prominent
 part was
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twofold in
Austria
 over the period.
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