You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The given pie chart demonstrates the proportion of the world passenger
car
production
in seven region
of the world in 2015. Change to a plural noun
regions
Overall
, the region of Greater China was the leader of the car
production
industry, on the contrary
, Middle
East only contributed Correct article usage
the Middle
with
a little percentage.
Change preposition
apply
It is clear that
the vast majority of car
production
held
by four different parts of the world. Europe and Greater China had Add a missing verb
is held
rougly
the half of the Correct your spelling
roughly
production
of Add an article
the car
car
in 2015 with Fix the agreement mistake
cars
Add an article
a ratio
the ratio
ratio
of 25% and 26% respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
ratios
Moreover
, one fifth
of the Add a hyphen
one-fifth
production
made
by North America which was only %3 more than their Japan/Korea counterpart.
Add a missing verb
was made
On the other hand
, many countries' car
production
percentages was
less than 10% in 2015. South Africa ,Change the verb form
were
for instance
, had 8
% Correct article usage
an 8
car
production
rate which was more than the combination of South America's (%4) and Africa's (%2) car
production
ratio.Submitted by historicalpen on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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