The plans below show the layout of a university's sport centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The picture gives information about how the future plans for the university
sports
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centre will be built compared to the present.
This
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writing will be given the details development of
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layout.
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, there is a lot of development that will be made for the next time. The
sports
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centre's layout will be adjusted and the place will be more organized than before.
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, the architect will remove the outdoor area and make it indoor only. In the past, we can see on the west and east there were outdoor courts. In the future, it will be replaced with a leisure pool and
sports
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hall (on the left and right side, respectively). There are
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many differences that will be made.
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, the dance studio
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will be built beside the
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hall.
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, the number of changing rooms will be increasing from one to three rooms.
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, they will add a cafe on the east of the entrance.
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, they will add a
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shop on the west of the main gate.
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