you broke your leg and your colleagues sent you get well cards and presents from work.

#leg #colleagues #cards #work

Deam team, I feel blessed and

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grateful

after

receiveing

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so many beautiful presents and cards for my speedy recovery. Even though I am still in pain, your constant support and words of encouragement have definitely helped me feel a lot better. I'm pleased that y'all are thinking of me, despite my absence which will

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continue for two more weeks. Nowadays, I spent most of my day painting and listening to podcasts as they have become my escape from boredom. I'm currently planning a meet-up with everyone at the office soon after my broken leg is capable of walking again.

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recital which I missed yesterday

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My recovery is slow but I can feel a massive improvement for the past few days. I am able to get up from my bed;

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, it still hurts when I move it sideways. Doctors told me to use crutches for another month which I totally despise! Well, I hope everyone is doing great at the office. I hope to see you all very soon! Yours faithfully, Akshita Parasher

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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you broke your leg and your colleagues sent you get well cards and presents from work.

Fully explain your ideas

Many countries spend a lot of money on art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say the money is better spent on improving health and education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that exercise is the key to health, while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today, more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?

Many people believe that a person’s culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that it has only minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.