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The pie chart shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in the UK in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in the UK in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie
chart
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 displays the statistical information on different categories of
people
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 living in
poverty
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 in the UK during 2002. Based on the
overall
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 data, sole parents and singles without
children
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 were mostly affected by
poverty
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while
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 the aged couple and single aged persons were least affected.
According to
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 the
chart
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, three categories of
people
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 were majorly affected.
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 26% were sole parents,
whereas
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 24% of singles without
children
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. And, the next section of the
people
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 who are largely affected are couples with
children
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 which amounts to 15%. And, it is worth mentioning that couples without
children
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 took up 9% of the
chart
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. It is evident, as per the
chart
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, that aged
people
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 were least affected by
poverty
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, followed by
single aged
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single-aged
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 persons who were slightly higher in percentage.
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The former
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 merely covered up about 5% and
latter
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the latter
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 was around 7%. And, it should be noted that a total of 14% of all households lived in
poverty
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.
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