The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The given image illustrates the map of Garlsdon
town
with a population of 65,000 in which two possible sites are selected for a new supermarket.
On overview, the Use synonyms
town
can be divided concentrically in which if we move towards the Use synonyms
centre
we will come across the countryside, followed by the housing and the industrial area, and Use synonyms
finally
at the Linking Words
centre
is the Use synonyms
town
Use synonyms
centre
.
Coming to the roads, there are three roads each connecting industrial are to three different towns. The first one is a 16-kilometre Use synonyms
road
towards Brandon which has around 15,000 inhabitants. The second one is a 25-kilometre Use synonyms
road
towards Cranston with a 29,000 population. And Use synonyms
finally
, a Linking Words
road
towards the 12-kilometre Use synonyms
road
to Hinton with 10,000 inhabitants. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the railway line runs across the map from northwest to southeast. The housing area is on the north and south side of the industrial area.
The first site is on the north-western side of the countryside which is at the periphery of the Linking Words
town
. Use synonyms
However
, the second site is in the Linking Words
centre
of the Use synonyms
town
where there is no traffic zone.Use synonyms
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