The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The graph illustrates the quantity of
leisure
time
spent by male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
of various employment Fix the agreement mistake
females
status
for one year ( between 1998 and 1999)
Fix the agreement mistake
statuses
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that most of the leisure
activities was
enjoyed by unemployed and retired people. Among these types of individuals, Change the verb form
were
time
for entertainment activities was spent by men (90 hours
a week
) rather than women (70 hours
a week
).
The male employers, who had a full
Add a hyphen
full-time
time
job
spent nearly 50 Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
hours
a week
and women more than 30 hours
was spent for leisure
. Interesting
fact Correct article usage
An interesting
that
individuals that didn’t Add a missing verb
is that
has
Change the verb form
have
temperament
job spent less Correct article usage
a temperament
time
for the rest. Also
the Add a comma
,Also
part
Add a hyphen
part-time
time
female employers spent their time
for leisure
about 40 hours
a week
. Another types
of people Replace the adjective
Another type
Other types
such
as housewives, spent 10 hours
more for
Change preposition
on
leisure
activities (nearly 50 hours
a week
) than part-time
female employers among
Change preposition
apply
this
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Vocabulary: Replace the words leisure, time, hours, week with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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