A bar chart shows the percentage of men and women in Great Britain who had driving licenses and another bar chart shows the percentage of men and women who applied for driving licenses at the age of 17-20. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart below displays the percentage between two
gender
who had driving licenses and the Change to a plural noun
genders
number
of boys and girls who already applied for driving licenses when they at Use synonyms
young
age between 17 and 20 years old in Great Britain.
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a young
Overall
, it is obvious that two fingers Linking Words
growth
steadily over Replace the word
grew
this
period in the first bar chart, the Linking Words
number
of men who had license more than Use synonyms
women
in the first year in the survey. Use synonyms
However
, the percentage of Linking Words
women
increased dramatically, reaching 60 Use synonyms
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percent
in the Change the spelling
per cent
last
year. In the second chart, the figures Linking Words
of
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for
two
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the two
sexual
rose slightly between 1996 and 2006.
In 1976, 70 Replace the word
sexes
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percent
of males had passed the driving exam and got licenses, after that five years the Change the spelling
per cent
number
still remained. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
number
rises gently and Use synonyms
finally
peaked Linking Words
80
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at 80
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percent
in 2006. In comparison, the finger of females stranded Change the spelling
per cent
in
30 Change preposition
at
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percent
in 1976 and began growth suddenly over the period, reaching 60 Change the spelling
per cent
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percent
in 2006.
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per cent
In
the other hand, 50 Change preposition
On
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percent
of young men drivers compared with 30 Change the spelling
per cent
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percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
teenager
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teenage
women
drivers in 1996. Ten years ago, in 2006 the percentage of males decreased slightly to 45 Use synonyms
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percent
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per cent
while
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
women
declined to 20 Use synonyms
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percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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