Many universities graduates cannot find a job in their choosen profession. What factors may have caused this situation and what is your opinion, should be done about it?

Nowadays,more and more

people

trying new , enjoyable and dangerous

activites

Correct your spelling

activities

instead

of old and common hobbies

such

as playing football . These

activities

have more

stugle

Correct your spelling

struggle

and

that is

what peoples want it .

However

, is the development positive , or are there more drawbacks than advantages

.

Change the punctuation

?

show examples

In

this

essay , I will look at the reasons

of

Change preposition

for

show examples

triying challing

Correct your spelling

trying challenging

activities

and I will give my own opinion about development . Let's begin

with

Change preposition

by

show examples

looking at the reason that

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

people

why

chousing

Correct your spelling

choosing

show examples

extreme

activities

such

as climbing

mountain

Fix the agreement mistake

mountains

show examples

and

bunge

Correct your spelling

bungee

jumping . The primary factor we need to take into consideration is that

people

have bored

to

Change preposition

with

show examples

doing

same

Correct article usage

the same

show examples

activities

which do

in

Change preposition

apply

show examples

regularly. Take some male employees ,

for instance

, when they take a break for 2

days

Change noun form

days'

show examples

holiday , some of them have done same

activities

such

as football match . As a

consuquance

Correct your spelling

consequence

,

people

are trying new and

excited

Replace the word

exciting

show examples

activities

because they

tired

Add a missing verb

are tired

show examples

of doing the same things and

hungry

Add a missing verb

are hungry

show examples

for new exciting ones . Turning to the other side of the argument , public concern has

arised

Correct your spelling

arisen

raised

about whether the dangerous

activites'

Correct your spelling

activities

activity

development is positive or not . It

is widely acknowledge

Change the verb form

is widely acknowledged

show examples

that the extreme

activites

' popularity increasing rapidly .

That is

to say ,

every

Change preposition

in every

show examples

part of the world , tourism

slided

Correct your spelling

slid

show examples

to the organising of

challing

Correct your spelling

challenging activities

activites

for

Change preposition

to

show examples

reach

Change the verb form

reaching

show examples

easy money . I

stongly

Correct your spelling

strongly

belive

Correct your spelling

believe

show examples

that , there were a negative but the benefits of these

type

Fix the agreement mistake

types

show examples

of

activities

outweigh

to

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the cons .

To sum up

,

althuogh

Correct your spelling

although

it is clear that

some

argument

Fix the agreement mistake

arguments

show examples

still going on , my belief it is better for

peoples

Change noun form

people's

show examples

mental

healt

Correct your spelling

health

.