The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make coparison where relevant.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make coparison where relevant.
The presented diagram shows information about
hydro electric
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hydroelectric
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power station which produces electricity day and night.
Overall
, if we look at
this
diagram carefully there are two reservoirs but their functions are not the same. The high-level
reservoirs
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dam is closed at night and opened during
a the
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day but the low-level
reservoir's
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reservoir
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dam operates a generator and pumps water within a day.
First,
water comes to the
reservoir
from the river and gathers there when the
reservoir
is full
then
the dam is opened to produce electricity. Following that
reservoir
's turbines to
performance
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two functions first
it
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apply
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operates
generator
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the generator
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and in the power ,station it is read
to
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apply
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the consumption
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words reservoir with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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