The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make coparison where relevant.
The presented diagram shows information about
hydro electric
power station which produces electricity day and night.
Correct your spelling
hydroelectric
Overall
, if we look at Linking Words
this
diagram carefully there are two reservoirs but their functions are not the same. The high-level Linking Words
reservoirs
dam is closed at night and opened duringChange the noun form
reservoir
a the
day but the low-level Choose an article
the
Use synonyms
reservoir's
dam operates a generator and pumps water within a day.
Change noun form
reservoir
First,
water comes to the Linking Words
reservoir
from the river and gathers there when the Use synonyms
reservoir
is full Use synonyms
then
the dam is opened to produce electricity. Following that Linking Words
reservoir
's turbines to Use synonyms
performance
two functions first Replace the word
perform
it
operates Correct pronoun usage
apply
generator
and in the power ,station it is read Correct article usage
the generator
to
the consumptionChange preposition
apply
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words reservoir with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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