You ordered an item from an online store and it has arrived damaged. Write a letter to the retailer to complain. In the letter: - Explain why you are unhappy - Request a refund - Make arrangements to return the damaged item

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Dear Sir or Madam, I have recently purchased a Laptop from your online store

last

Monday.

However

, After receiving the product I noticed that the display of the Laptop is damaged at the right corner of the screen.

This

is something I did not expect from you as you are a reliable retailer. I am really disappointed that when I informed

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customer service, Their response was not satisfactory. In the meantime, They said that they can't do anything in

this

regard as I may have damaged the product. I am requesting a full refund for

this

item as I cannot use it for my daily purpose.

In addition

, I hope you will make

necessary

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arrangements to take the damaged product from my end as well. I hope I won't have to deliver the Laptop to you on my own. Looking forward to hearing from you. Best Regards, Adam

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

150 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

I am writing to express my disappointment
I regret to inform you that
I am dissatisfied with the item I received
The item arrived damaged
The product is in unsatisfactory condition
I expected better quality
I would like to request a refund
I kindly ask for your assistance in resolving this matter
I would appreciate it if you could provide instructions
I suggest arranging a pick-up service
I expect a prompt response and resolution
I hope for a satisfactory outcome

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