The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age in the UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Given is a chart
rewaling
the Correct your spelling
revealing
rate
of used internet
in daily life for four age types in between 2003 to 2006 .Overall
, when the ages are going to down , the rate
of used internet
is climb
the Change the verb form
is climbed
is climbing
ledder
.
It is evident that youngCorrect your spelling
ladder
lender
leader
Fix the agreement mistake
people
peoples
used Add an article
the internet
internet
more than old Correct your spelling
Internet
peoples
. Between 2003 and 2004 Fix the agreement mistake
people
figure
stayed constant Correct article usage
the figure
in
the youngest' Change preposition
at
rate
with
80 Change preposition
of
percent
. After Change the spelling
per cent
reached
a peak for one year , Wrong verb form
reaching
this
rate
fell steadily for one year to almost 90 percent
.
Change the spelling
per cent
In contrast
, the rate
always stay
under 60 Change the verb form
stays
percent
for both 55-64 Change the spelling
per cent
years
and 65+ years
.In fact , ın
2003 65+ people did not use Correct your spelling
in
Add an article
the internet
internet
until 2004 . After 2004 there was a Correct your spelling
Internet
slightly
decline in Change the adverb
slight
rate
of used Add an article
the rate
internet
for 65+ Correct article usage
the internet
years
people . The oldest peoples'
Change noun form
people's
rate
reach 20 percent
in 2006.
Change the spelling
per cent
In addition
, the rate
shows it is almost same
in both ages 24-44 and 45-54 . Until 2006 55-64 Correct article usage
the same
peoples
used Fix the agreement mistake
people
Add an article
the internet
internet
more than 25-44 Correct your spelling
Internet
years
peoples
Fix the agreement mistake
people
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