The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the line graph illustrates the demonstration of tourists who visited four different attractions (Art gallery, Pier,
Pavilion
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, and Festival) from 1980 to 2010 in Brighton, UK.
Overall
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, the four popular attractions shared different trends
according to
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the time period. The
pavilion
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was the most popular place in Brighton,
while
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the pier took
last
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place. In the beginning, the
percentage
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of tourists who visited the
pavilion
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was around 20 and it peaked at 50% in 1915.
Then
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, it dropped almost a quarter to 30% in 2010.
In addition
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, the proportion of people in art galleries starts at 20%, which was third place in 1985 before it became the leader in 1985 with 40%. After all, it declined to lower than 10% from 1990 to 2010.
On the other hand
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, the Festival shared the highest
percentage
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of 30 at the beginning of the data and equally shared the same
percentage
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of tourists who visited the
pavilion
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at 30% in 1985.
Then
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, it remained stable for over 20 years.
Nonetheless
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, the
percentage
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of pier visitors fluctuated from 10% to 15% every 5 years and rose steadily to 20%
at the end
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of 2010.
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