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The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs illustrate how many
people
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 subscribed to mobile and positioned telephones in
Eritrea
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,
India
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, the
UK
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 and
Uruguay
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 in the years from 2005 to 2015. Units are measured in hundreds of
people
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.
Overall
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, the first line shows that the rate of
people
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, committed to cell phones increased in
India
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 and
Uruguay
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 and remained the same in
Eritrea
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 and
UK
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 for the whole period of time. The second is giving information about still phones and it can be seen that there were differences between the countries but, in general, in every each of them there were no big fluctuations. The number of
people
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, using mobiles increased in
India
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 and
Uruguay
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 in the years between 2005 (between 0 and 50 hundred) and 2015 (150 for
Uruguay
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 and around 75 in
India
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). The
UK
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 stayed at approximately 100 and
Eritrea
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, with the lowest count was around 0. Subscriptions for fixed phones were not moving a lot over the years and it can be seen that
UK
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 and
Uruguay
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 were leading (60 hundred
people
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 and 30-40 hundred
people
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 respectively).
India
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 and
Eritrea
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 were not really using
this
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 kind of service (around 0).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, eritrea, india, uk, uruguay with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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