The line graph compares changes in the number of people who traveled on a daily basis by 3 different means of transport in the UK from 1970 to 2030.
The line graph compares changes in the
number
of people
who traveled
on a daily basis by 3 different means of transport in the UK from 1970 to 2030.
Change the spelling
travelled
Overall
, there is an increase
in the number
of commuters
going by car
and train
while
the opposite was true for bus
travelers
. It is apparent that cars are the most prevalent means of transport over the period.
In the year 1970, standing around 5 Change the spelling
travellers
million
, the car
was the most popular vehicle used by citizens. In the same year, the number
of UK people
commuting by bus
accounted for about 4 million
, double that of train
commuters
. During the next 30 years, a significant increase
of approximately 7 million
in the number
of car
travelers
was saw, 4 Change the spelling
travellers
million
higher than that of train
travelers
. An opposite trend was witnessed in the Change the spelling
travellers
number
of bus
commuters
as it decreased gradually to above 3 million
in 2000. In the next 10 years, Car
continues to increase
slightly while
bus
tends to decrease lowly, in the case of train
just recorded a remaining unchanged at 3 Add an article
the train
a train
million
.
In the next 20 years, it is clear that
a gradual rise of 1 million
was seen in the number
of people
who traveled
by Change the spelling
travelled
car
in comparison to about 4 million
train
travelers
in 2020. Change the spelling
travellers
By contrast
, there is a slight downtrend of about 1 million
in the number
of people
communicating by bus
. By 2023, it is forecasted that the number
of car
commuters
will go up to reach the peak of 9 million
, three times as much as that of bus
travelers
. Change the spelling
travellers
Furthermore
, the year 2030 witnessed a steady increase
of about 2 million
in the number
of people
traveling
by Change the spelling
travelling
train
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