The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons.

The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons.
The given bar chart elucidates the activities and the number of
hours
spent on them by
the
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teenagers per week in Chester from 2002 to 2007. Clearly, watching television was the most common
activity
for which the maximum number of weekly
hours
were spent,
whereas
the least
favorite
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activity
was bowling. The weekly
hours
spent by
the
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teenagers
in
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going to pubs kept increasing from 2002 to 2004, which was constant till 2006.
However
, there was a surge in the weekly
hours
spent on the
activity
in 2007. Watching television was the most common
activity
and the
hours
spent were constant from 2002 to 2003.
However
, it kept increasing from 2004 to 2007. The
hours
spent shopping, playing sports and doing homework were comparable. Watching DVDs saw an increase in weekly
hours
spent from 2002 to 2004 and a considerable decrease from 2005 to 2007. The least
favorite
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activity
was bowling, with nearly 1-3 weekly
hours
spent by teenagers.
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