You and some friends ate meal at the restaurants to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and services. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. Give details of your visit to the restaurant Explain the reason for the celebration Say what was the good about the food and services.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to give feedback on your
hotel
food and services which I enjoyed on 25th May 2023. Primarily, I am Eva Smith, and I visited occasionally in green park restaurant, Sydney to celebrate special events like birthday parties, success parties and many more.
Moreover
, I visited that
hotel
last
month to celebrate my best friend's birthday.
Furthermore
, I make my friend's special day memorized that's why, I had planned to give a surprise birthday party. As it is not only the best way to meet my close friend but
also
spend quality time with them and enjoyed it.
Besides
this
, the
hotel
is very close to my area and I
also
heard from another person in my town it provides discounts offer on special days. All in all, your
hotel
services and food quality are very excellent
as well as
your employee's behaviour is very friendly.
Apart from
this
, the restaurant services are too good and it fulfils all orders in a proper time. In the end,we could enjoy the moment in the celebration environment. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours sincerely, Eva Smith.
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