Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects at university in many countries. (2-part question) Why is this? What effects does this have on society?

With a myriad of career options to choose from nowadays, not a lot of students are opting to study

science

subjects

in college.

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essay discusses what could be the factors that attribute to

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among

learners

and how

this

could bring with

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of repercussions. For a start,/For one thing,(sequencing linker)it could be argued that with globalisation and advancement of technology and business ,there has been a development of

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of new courses at universities and professions which could not only provide lucrative compensation , status

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but

also

a good return on investment as opposed to that of

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years ago when the number of courses a student could choose

as well as

the chances of employability in

subjects

other than sciences

were

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extremely restricted.

Besides

this

,/Alongside

this

, standard

science

subjects

,

such

as Applied Chemistry, Physics and Biology were highly demanding and popular among students with good cognitive competence ,

problem solving

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skills ,most of the

learners

who lacked the scientific temperament were loathsome /reluctant/unwilling to take up

such

difficult and mundane

science

subjects

as they could neither bear with the burden of understanding of complex concepts

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and

therefore

end up mugging up without any conceptual clarity which in turn substantially reduced their grades nor put in so much of patience and persistence in working out

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of problems to become experts /to gain expertise.(Give

an evidence

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evidence

a piece of evidence

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for

anyone

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point)

However

,/

Nevertheless

,/

Nonetheless

,

learners

have now understood that they could become subject matter specialists in

subjects

other than

science

by putting in less

efforts

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. Having said that, what would be more worrisome /a far more serious concern would be a dearth of Intellectual Scientific

learners

and researchers with few people pursuing careers in

science

and related fields which could considerably decline /diminish the number of technological discoveries, innovations that could result in a slowdown in economy , business , trade .Give

an evidence

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/

This

could be exemplified by the developing countries

who

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hardly have any advanced technology

are

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compelled to import

the

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scientific

know how

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from other nations ,and

that is

exorbitantly pricey. you can give another point / round off with something relevant but not repetitive.

To conclude

, /In conclusion, even though fewer students are choosing to study

science

as they struggle with/grapple with learning the theories, it cannot be denied, /no one can deny that

this

could lead to a workforce which would lack

science

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of science

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researchers /

this

could lead to fewer scientific inventions which could reduce the pace of development of the nation. /

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could stifle

development

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the development

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of

nation

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a nation

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which would have to depend on other nations for …….