With a myriad of career options to choose from nowadays, not a lot of students are opting to study
science
subjects
in college.
This
essay discusses what could be the factors that attribute to
such
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among
learners
and how
this
could bring with
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of repercussions.
For a start,/For one thing,(sequencing linker)it could be argued that with globalisation and advancement of technology and business ,there has been a development of
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of new courses at universities and professions which could not only provide lucrative compensation , status
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but
also
a good return on investment as opposed to that of
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years ago when the number of courses a student could choose
as well as
the chances of employability in
subjects
other than sciences
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extremely restricted.
Besides
this
,/Alongside
this
, standard
science
subjects
,
such
as Applied Chemistry, Physics and Biology were highly demanding and popular among students with good cognitive competence ,
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skills ,most of the
learners
who lacked the scientific temperament were loathsome /reluctant/unwilling to take up
such
difficult and mundane
science
subjects
as they could neither bear with the burden of understanding of complex concepts
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and
therefore
end up mugging up without any conceptual clarity which in turn substantially reduced their grades nor put in so much of patience and persistence in working out
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of problems to become experts /to gain expertise.(Give
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a piece of evidence
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point)
However
,/
Nevertheless
,/
Nonetheless
,
learners
have now understood that they could become subject matter specialists in
subjects
other than
science
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.
Having said that, what would be more worrisome /a far more serious concern would be a dearth of Intellectual Scientific
learners
and researchers with few people pursuing careers in
science
and related fields which could considerably decline /diminish the number of technological discoveries, innovations that could result in a slowdown in economy , business , trade .Give
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a piece of evidence
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/
This
could be exemplified by the developing countries
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hardly have any advanced technology
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compelled to import
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scientific
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from other nations ,and
that is
exorbitantly pricey. you can give another point / round off with something relevant but not repetitive.
To conclude
, /In conclusion, even though fewer students are choosing to study
science
as they struggle with/grapple with learning the theories, it cannot be denied, /no one can deny that
this
could lead to a workforce which would lack
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researchers /
this
could lead to fewer scientific inventions which could reduce the pace of development of the nation. /
This
could stifle
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of
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which would have to depend on other nations for …….