The pie charts below show the coffee production, coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world
The pie chart above depicts the percentage of consumption and production of
coffee
in different nations. Besides
, it also
provide
data regarding Change the verb form
provides
to
profit distribution in Remove the preposition
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this
sector economy.
To begin
with, its
obvious that Europe is the largest Correct your spelling
it's
coffee
consumers
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consumer
the
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a
share
of 41%, followed by America as a
second largest Correct article usage
the
accounted
for 39%, a figure of 80% combined from both nations. Wrong verb form
accounting
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Japan's
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is only
at
8%, and the remaining Change preposition
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for
12% is consumed by the rest of the world.
South Africa is the largest Change preposition
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coffee
producer with share
of 44%, and Add an article
a share
then
the second largest by
Indonesia with Change preposition
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contribution
of 22% from total global production. Add an article
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figure followed
by Japan and Vietnam with Add a missing verb
was followed
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the proportion
a proportion
proportion
of 18% and 16% respectively. Intriguingly, the Fix the agreement mistake
proportions
share
of Japan
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Japan's
coffee
consumption relatively
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is relatively
more
lower despite Change the word
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of
its reputation as Change preposition
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fourth
largest Correct article usage
the fourth
coffee
producer globally.
The highest profit distribution contributed
by Add a missing verb
was contributed
delivery
sector, a figure Correct article usage
the delivery
more
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of more
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Retailers
this
share
almost by quarter, and then
followed by producers and exporters accounted
for 15% and 10% respectively.Wrong verb form
accounting
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