The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.
The bar depicted the proportion of expenses of five different categories in the United
States
, Canada, the United Kingdom and Japan
within
2009. The most prominent figures were Food, Accommodation and Transportation accounted for the highest rate, whilst Medical Change preposition
in
Expense
and Fashion were lower.
Regarding the expense of Food, Fix the agreement mistake
Expenses
Japan
witnessed the greatest proportion-about 23%, as opposed to the United States
, which accounted for roughly 13%. Nonetheless
,
The United States
was the most ubiquitous country in terms of spending for accommodation with more than one fourth
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one-fourth
while
Canada remained the least referred with one fifth
, respectively. Add a hyphen
one-fifth
In addition
, Canadians spent 20% of their total expenditure on Transportation, whereas
Japan
accounted for one-tenth, which was the lowest figure.
In terms of Medical care and Fashion, the United States
was the most dominant nation for the former and remained the lowest rank for the latter, with less than one-tenth and roughly 4%. The lowest figures of
Healthcare belonged to the United Kingdom, roughly 3%. Change preposition
for
While
Canada had the highest rate of Clothing, this
nation and Japan
shared the second position in terms of Health care with 7% and 4%, respectively.Submitted by nghiemtran2909 on
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