The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The presented pie chart displays the proportion of Anthropology graduated activities after completing their study in a particular institution,
while
the table represents the wage of
Anthropologists
in three distinct sectors after having 5 years of working experience.
Overall
,
it is clear that
a full-time job becomes the favourite destination of alumni,
whereas
,
anthropologists
who earn salaries between $25,000-49,000 had the least percentages in all sectors.
According to
the charts, more than half of anthropology alum choose to do full-time work after graduation.
Then
, the graduates who do part-time work and unemployment show lower percentages than the previous category, at 15% and 12% respectively.
In addition
, the full-time postgrad and unknown categories have the same percentage, at 8%.
Lastly
, the graduates who do part-time work and postgrad study simultaneously show the lowest percentages, at 5%. From the table, there are only 5% of
Anthropologists
who job as Freelance consultants earn $25,000-49,000,
while
the workers who obtain $75,000-99,000 and $100,000+ have the biggest proportion, at two-fifths. In the Government sector, the percentage of
Anthropologists
who get $25,000-49,000 is 5%, and the most dominant workers, which are half, receive $100,000+. In Private companies, the lowest and highest proportion are people who obtain $25,000-49,000 and $50,000-74,999 respectively.
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