The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the amount of money that certain
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made from different exports in the years 2015 and 2016. The table shows how much those classes had changed in 2016 compared to 2015. Units are measured in billions in the chart and in percentages in the table.
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, it can be seen that most of the exports were related to things like petroleum
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and engineered goods (which portion got even higher in the following year), and the lowest earnings were from agriculture
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and textiles (
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with increasing rates with time). The first two categories from the chart were the highest ones with rates for both slightly over 60 billion in 2015 and an increase in 2016 with 3% for petroleum
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and 8.5% for engineered goods.
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rise made them even more valuable with approximately 70 billion for each of them in 2016. Agricultural
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weren't exported a lot in 2015 (40%), and neither did textiles (between 30% and 40%),
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, there was a sharp climb in percentages in 2016 for fabrics (over 15% growth).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words products with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • economic sector
  • percentage change
  • increment
  • decrement
  • fluctuation
  • trend analysis
  • year-on-year comparison
  • significant growth/decline
  • stagnation
  • market dynamics
  • fiscal repercussions
  • trade balance
  • competitive advantage
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