You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter, -Explain that you would like to apply for the job -Give some details of any relevant experience that you have -Specify the days and times that would suit you

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for the part-time job as a kitchen assistant at your restaurant. My name is Maria Do, 21 years of age and a third-year student in the hospitality department at Queen’s University. I would like to find a job in the hospitality sector to gain some hands-on experience for my final thesis.

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, I want to earn some money to pay for my final year’s tuition fees. During the past three years, I have worked as a cashier and a kitchen assistant at a food store. In the kitchen job, my majors are making sandwiches, salads, pizza and wraps but I believe I can make other dishes too as long as I am trained properly. As I have classes during weekdays, I can work the whole weekend and the time is

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your schedule, and I would like to work on Monday and Wednesday evenings from 5.00 to 9.00 too. I enclose my resume for your convenience and look forward to receiving your response. Yours faithfully, Maria Do

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

178 words

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hospitality
customer service
availability
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relevant experience
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schedule
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team player
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