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The line graph illustrates the number of UK people commuting to work every day by car, bus or train from 1970 to 2030

The line graph illustrates the number of UK people commuting to work every day by car, bus or train from 1970 to 2030
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The line chart experiences the
amount
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number
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 of British commuters who use transportation for
working
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work
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 between 1970 and 2030. A glance at the picture provided reveals that cars are the majority of
vehicle
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vehicles
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 in England
in
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which it is predicted will
be
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increase
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an increase
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 in the future
as well as
train
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trains
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.
However
, the
bus
 shows a downward trend until the next decades. Almost 6
millions
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million
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of
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people in
UK
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the UK
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 used a car as their main transportation to go
their
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to their
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 office since 1970 and it had a steady rise until 2010
at
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to
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 around 7
millions
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million
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. The prediction of
cars
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car
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 utilization in 2030 shows a significant increase reaching 9
millions
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million
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.
Furthermore
, commuters who use
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the train
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train
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trains
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also
 experience
a
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apply
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constance
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constant
 growth when it started at just under 2.7
millions
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million
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 in 1970 and rose to approximately 3
millions
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million
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 in 2010 and it will cross the
bus
 in 2030 when it has a peak at almost 6
millions
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million
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. The UK people who
commutes
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commute
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 by
bus
fall
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fell
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 gradually from 4
millions
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million
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 in 1970 to just over 3
millions
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million
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 in 2010. It is predicted that in 2030
bus
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buses
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 will be a minority of
vehicle
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vehicles
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who
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that
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 are used by UK individuals to do their job
as
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apply
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just beneath 3
millions
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million
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.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bus, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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