The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.

The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.
THE GIVEN PIE DIAGRAMS ILLUSTRATE THE PROPORTION OF CONTRIBUTION OF DIFFERENT REGIONS OF THE INDUSTRY TOWARDS THE ECONOMY OF TURKEY IN 200 AND 2016.
OVERALL
, THE AGRICULTURE, HEALTH AND EDUCATION SECTORS TOOK THE MOST PART IN ESTABLISHING THE COUNTRY'S ECONOMY IN BOTH YEARS,
WHEREAS
THE LEAST BENEFICIAL DEPARTMENTS WERE CONSTRUCTION, FINANCE AND BUSINESS-RELATED DOMAINS BECAUSE OF THE FINANCIAL SITUATIONS. IN THE YEAR 2000, THE AGRICULTURAL SYSTEM BOOMED AND GAVE THE MAXIMUM PROFIT OF 24%, BUT THE CONSTRUCTION INDUSTRY COULD NOT MAKE MUCH AND MADE THE LOWEST PROFIT OF 3% ,
IN ADDITION
, THE MANUFACTURING AND UTILITY INDUSTRIES PERCENTAGES INCREASED FROM 8% AND 14% IN 2000 TO 12% AND 16% IN 2016.
HOWEVER
, IN 2016, HEALTH AND EDUCATION SUPPORTED THE COUNTRY BY HAVING THE HIGHEST PERCENTAGE OF 17%, WHICH BY CHANCE WAS THE SAME IN 2000 AS WELL.
THEREFORE
, THE FINANCE INDUSTRY TOOK A HIT AND HAD THE LEAST FRACTION OF ONLY 8%, WHICH IS STILL 2% MORE THAN WHAT IT WAS IN 2000,
SIMILARLY
, THE LEISURE AND GOVERNMENT SECTOR'S PROPORTION DECREASED FROM 17% AND 12% IN 2000 TO 14% TO 9% IN 2016
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