The bar chart shows the data of five portions of fruit and vegetables eaten by children, males and females per day in the UK between 2001 and 2008.

The bar chart shows the data of five portions of fruit and

vegetables

eaten by

children

, males and females per day in the UK between 2001 and 2008.

Overall

,

it is clear that

the highest percentage of all people consuming fruit and

vegetables

was

women

while

the opposite was true for

children

.

In addition

, the proportion of people eating these food items saw a significant increase over the period. In the beginning, it can be seen that

while

a gradual growth to more than 25% was seen in the number of

women

consuming

vegetables

and fruits, the proportion of both

children

and men remained stable at 13% and 17% over the 3-year period. After 3 years, all the figures for

children

, males and females witnessed an upward trend before the consumption of

vegetables

and fruits by

women

reached the peak at 35%.

By contrast

, the year 2007 witnessed a rise to its highest point at 22% in the number of

children

eating these food items compared to

with

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about 33% in

women

although

it witnessed a slight decrease.

Furthermore

, the figure for males consuming five portions of fruit and

vegetables

remained stable at nearly 27% from 2006 to 2007 before going down to just over 25%, which was lower than about 5% as opposed to

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rate.