The chart below shows a comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.
The pie chart above depicts various
resources
of energy
produced in France in the two different periods, 1995 and 2005 or two decades.
According to
the data provided, in 1995 gas, petro and coal almost as unrenewable resources
contributed equally to energy
generated for just below one-third for each categories
, at 29,63%, 29,27% 29,80% respectively. Meanwhile, nuclear contribution as renewable Change to a singular noun
category
resources
accounted for 6,40% of total Fix the agreement mistake
resource
energy
, and the remaining stood at 4,90% come from unknown resources
.
In 2005, the portion of gas and coal toward energy
production increased slightly to 30,31% and 30,93% each, meanwhile
petro share fell to 19,55%. Add a comma
,meanwhile
On the other hand
, nuclear as source
of renewable Add an article
a source
energy
has soared by 3,70% to 10,10%, similarly
for other resources
has climbed to 9,10% by 4,20%.
From the statictics
, we can see that there was Correct your spelling
statistics
lack
of dependence on gas, Correct article usage
a lack
petro
and coal as unrenewable Correct your spelling
petrol
resources
due to
Correct article usage
the increase
increase
in nuclear utilisation as a renewable resource.Change the verb form
increasing
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