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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

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In recent years, there is a growing recognition of the popularity of
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 students who are choosing
science
 subjects in
university
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universities
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 in many
countries
.
This
 essay will discuss the causes and
the
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impacts of
this
 trend. There are many reasons why
science
 subjects are not
choosen
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chosen
 in university. The first obvious cause is
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a
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 expensive cost.
This
is arises
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 from the fact that the
science
 courses normally have
the
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 higher price than the others.
Besides
, in some undeveloped
countries
, there are fewer schools which have enough facilities to
teaching
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science
 majors, so
that
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if students want to study
science
 subjects, they often choose to study
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abroad
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 in developed
countries
,
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 and spend
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 numerous amount of money
for
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 it. It is
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,
understand
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 why,
this
 situation takes place. There are
serveral
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several
 impacts
from
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this
 trend, and
this
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 all tend to
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be detrimental
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.
To begin
 with, it is undoubted that fewer students choosing
science
 majors
leads
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lead
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 to lacking human
resource
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resources
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. In fact, there are some
countries
who
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 have to face
with
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apply
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a
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 problem of lacking
science
 employers.
As a result
,
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apply
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major tasks and issues can not be solved by professional workers. Another impact
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need
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 to be mentioned is that
the
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society can not have
a
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overall
 development. Mainly because
,
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 the governments have new policies which need
scientist
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scientists
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 to grow
countries
, so if they do not have enough
resource
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resources
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, the plans may have to delay or
cancell
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cancelled
. In conclusion,
this
phenomenom
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phenomenon
largely
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is largely
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due to
 the cost and the facilities in schools
where
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that
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 teach
science
 majors, and it has
serveral
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several
 outcomes of lacking
of
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science
 employers and the society can not completely
developed
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be developed
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.
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  • role models
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  • access to information
  • technological stagnation
  • shortage
  • skilled professionals
  • innovation
  • healthcare sector
  • workforce
  • global competitiveness
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  • public health services
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