The chart below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 1998 and 2013.
The given pie chart gives information about British undergraduates
could
speak six types Correct pronoun usage
who could
foreign
languages in one university in England from 1998 to 2013.
It is Change preposition
of foreign
noticable
that by 1998 British students had spoken the most Spanish only. And in 2013 Correct your spelling
noticeable
this
figure the most percentage remained.
In 1998 , Spanish only and No other language
showed the highest percentage of 30% and 20% especially Two other languages and German only showed identical figure
and made up 10% . Another Fix the agreement mistake
figures
language
and French only accounting
for 15%. By 2013, Spanish only Wrong verb form
accounted
had
unchanged Unnecessary verb
apply
with
about 35%. Change preposition
by
However
, Another language
had taken place from No other language
and consisting of 20%. Two other languages slightly increased (15%). No other language
, French only and German only showed identical proportion
and at 10%.Fix the agreement mistake
proportions
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