The bar chart shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.  

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the ten leading countries that produced and consumed
electricity
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in the year 2014.
Overall
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, both China and the US were significantly higher in terms of producing and using
electricity
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,
whereas
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the rest of the countries performed relatively moderate-low in both categories. The Chinese and Americans were undefeated producers
as well as
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consumers of
electricity
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in the given year. The data shows that China made the highest quantity of
electricity
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at 5,398
billion
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kWh
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, closely followed by the United States at 4,099
billion
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kWh
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. The usage of the
electricity
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of these two nations
also
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demonstrated a similar pattern as their production, because China was again leading at 5,322 in comparison to America at 3,866
billion
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kWh
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. The remaining seven countries ,
on the other hand
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, showed much lower numbers in both use and production when compared to the two mentioned above.
For instance
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, Russia made only 1,057
while
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using 1,038
billion
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kwh
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whereas
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Japan produced and consumed 936,2 and 856.7
billion
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kwh
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respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, billion, kwh with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • disparity
  • significant
  • top ten countries
  • main features
  • compare
  • relevant
  • geographical concentration
  • trends
  • patterns
  • implications
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