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Coffee production bar chart between 1995 and 2020 in 4 nations, Brazil, Colombia, Indonesia and Vietnam.

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The given bar chart illustrates how much coffee was produced in four different countries, namely Brazil, Colombia,
Indonesia
, and
Vietnam
 over a period of 20
years
 from 1990 to 2010. Units are measured in million tonnes.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that Brazil was the biggest producer
while
Vietnam
 was the lowest. In terms of Brazil at the start, it stood at approximately 0.7 in 1990 and had an upward trend to the end of the period. It reached a peak at 1.9 after 20
years
. A similar pattern
also
 happened to
Indonesia
 and
Vietnam
 which began at 0,2 and 0,1, respectively. Looking in more detail, for the first five
years
, both
Indonesia
 and
Vietnam
 remained unchanged with their initial value. In the next 15
years
,
Indonesia
 and
Vietnam
 experienced a small growth to just 0,4 and 0,3, respectively.
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Colombia had a downward trend, starting at 0,6 and witnessed a gradual decrease for the next 20
years
 to precisely 0,3, the same level as
Vietnam
.
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