A resturant near your house is making a lot of noise. You called the manger but no action was taken. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: Introduce yourself Describe the problems you are facing because of this *suggest solutions

#resturant #house #noise #manger #action #manager #*introduce #*describe #*suggest

Hi Dear sir, My name is Ekjot, living in your neighbourhood. I am writing to express my annoyance that music from your restaurant is usually too loud and it interrupts me and my family.

Although

it is fun to listen to songs

while

doing work, it should not be that much noise that disturbs others. Actually, I am a student and I need to study at home. Whenever I started doing my school work, meanwhile a strong noise from your food court distracted me from my aim. I can not able to focus on my studies. I am requesting you again that please make the volume low so that you can

also

enjoy the rhythm. It

also

makes me feel better when I would able to do concentration on my lessons.

Also

, you can fix voice reduction tools in your campaign, so that no one gets disturbed. Hope, you would understand my situation and will think about taking action. Yours faithfully

Submitted by ekjotkaur882 on Thu Jun 15 2023

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

161 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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