Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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pollutants which are created

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many factors, especially wrapping bags. Some individuals agree that

manufactures

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and malls should be responsible to decrease

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of packing of

goods

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others think that

customers

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should prevent buying from packaging. In my point of view, I tend to agree with the former. On one hand, companies should take

responsibilities

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packing as their

productions

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are made by them

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the wrapping added. Some

customers

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may not have enough patience to untie the wrapping covering the product, especially the thick one. So the part covering can be easily thrown away which leads to

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pollution.

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, with enormous wrapping parts, we

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need the same sizes of places to store them and recycle

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some purpose which can become pollutants. In order to reduce the amount of pollution,

manufactures

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and supermarkets should minimize the amount of packaging to avoid those factors leading to

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.

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,

customers

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should

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be aware to avoid buying

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with a lot of packaging. In some cases, the products must need a bag or a covering part to save them from impacts, so

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wrapping parts is inevitable.

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,

customers

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should be aware of putting covering

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in the right places and choose productions having little packing if they are not ready to handle the packing of

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.

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, both buying products and the production

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a thick cover

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on the need of

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so they should be responsible for packing. In conclusion, both individuals from two sides have their own reasons to support their opinion,

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however

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I tend to agree with the view that

customers

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should take responsibility for avoiding buying

goods

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with a lot of packing