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The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014.

The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014.
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The given pie chart gives some information about volunteering
activities
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 done by individuals in six different industries by their organization namely environmental, art, sport, healthcare, educational and others in 2 distinct ages 2008
as well as
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 2014.
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 as can ostensibly be seen, there is a clear rise in environmental, sports and healthcare voluntary actions during 6
years
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;
however
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, educational, art and other organizations experience a gradual decrease in the same
years
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. Starting with Educational volunteers, the first biggest one with 24% in 2008, there is a 7% decline during these
years
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 but it remains in the top three
activities
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 by 17% and falling to third place. Art lovers at the same time have less interest in volunteer
activities
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 with an exact 6% drop to 12% and loss their third place to mentioned educational works.
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, the interest in involving volunteer
activities
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 in other industries has fallen from 6% to 9% and is the second least favourable action.
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, there are some upward trends at the same time. Sports
activities
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 with 10% which is the most increase among volunteers in 2014 touched the 25% point. The second greatest rise belongs to environmentalists who saw an 8% rise and reached a peak of 29%. The lowest popular
activities
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 belong to the healthcare system with only 1% growth during 8
years
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.
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