One of your friend lives in another country. You want to spend time working in that country. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, you should: •describe why you want to work in that country; •tell him/her about your skills and experience; •ask some questions related to work (wage, salary)

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Dear Anna, How are you, Anna? I know

you

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you are having a good time. I am writing to say good news about my

work

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. I find my dream job in your country Canada. You know that I wanted to

work

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in Canada. I am going to there next Friday. I have a well- experienced

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IT and I worked

that

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in that

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area for

long

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time.

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Moreover

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I can speak three languages. So I am the best at calculation.

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Currently

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most of my folks

work

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overseas so as to wages. I have some questions for you about salary in your country in these areas. You know that I have planned to

work

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overseas for ages in order to achieve

well-paid

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a well-paid

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job.

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, let me know if my profession will be paid well. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Love Lucy.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

143 words

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