The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
The figure shows
that
the trendline of global Correct word choice
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water
used by three different areas between 1900 to 2000.
Overall
, maximum
volume of Add an article
the maximum
water
was used by agriculture
sector as Correct article usage
the agriculture
compare
to other sectors. More Change the form of the verb
compared
water
was consumed per person in Brazil than Congo
.
In 1900, Change preposition
in Congo
agriculture
used the most consumption with around 500 km3, followed by industrial site
and Fix the agreement mistake
sites
domestic
side used around 100km3 Correct article usage
the domestic
similarly
. Then
, fifty years later, agriculture
raised up
to Change preposition
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be
over Unnecessary verb
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than
1,000km3, factory increased being 200km3, Change preposition
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however
local Add the comma(s)
,however
site
still Fix the agreement mistake
sites
was
stagnant for consuming Unnecessary verb
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water
. In 2000, agriculture
plagued to be
3,000 km3, industrial jumped to Unnecessary verb
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be
1,000 km3, and domestic Unnecessary verb
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also
increased to be
200 km3 used the Unnecessary verb
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water
.
Moreover
, the table describes that
the comparison of Correct word choice
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water
used between Brazil and Democratic
Republic of Congo in 2000. Brazil with Correct article usage
the Democratic
the
number of population is 176 million; irrigation land is 26,500km2, they are using Correct article usage
a
water
is 359m3
per person. Correct your spelling
359 m3
Then
, compare with Congo, the population in this
country is 5.2 million and the irrigated land is 100km2, they consumed water
around 8m3 for
per person.Change preposition
apply
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