The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia between 1950 and today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

As long as

rewarding

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reward

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is viable, why should the authority, parents or teachers, think of

punishment

? Teaching

right

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behaviour needs employing the

right

device as well.

Punishment

per se, by spreading the voice of anger to innocent kids, will not be a promising tool. Praising the

right

act,

instead

, could promote

such

distinction.

Furthermore

,

punishment

is too narrow a strategy to sustain long. It requires supervision and rough acts. Rather, if the kids are provided with the chance to know how to tell the

right

and

the

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wrong apart, they themselves will avoid

wrong doing

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wrongdoing

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withough

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without

the

present

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presence

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of

the

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authority. The result is

the

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that

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society will have a well-trained generation soon, and the requirement of police and the judicial processes will reach the minimum. Unfortunately, the existence of

punishment

amongst some families and schools is an undeniable fact.

Over populated

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communities find

punishment

a good way to have the youngsters under control

,

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since it is easier to perform and faster to catch our short goals. A psychologically

proved

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proven

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system needs proper education

to

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the members of the teaching profession and

limitation

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limitations

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in the number of pupils in classrooms. If a form of

punishment

is considered, it is better to avoid physical types, like old-fashion spanking in the

west

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West

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or falak in old Iran. Time-out or retrieval of privileges could

be better substitutes

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. To recap,

punishment

needs to be avoided in education. It is prone to spread anger and violence in future generations by implementing violent techniques. Rewarding the

right

action would be a nicer replacement. Its long-term effect

also

requires no supervision for our society.

Nevertheless

, if

punishment

is thought to be crucial in a disprivileged society, physical forms of it need to be excluded.