The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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These plants depict a redesign of the university

sports

centre plan and now. It is clear from the plants that the outdoor courts had been replaced to be an extra space for the main building.

According to

what is shown they will build an extra changing room in the left corner, and they will increase the gym zone to connect two dancing studios in front of the

sports

hall area.

Moreover

, they will add a leisure pool next to the changing room, but they will build a special changing room in front of the new pool with

sports

shops on the left side of the entry and if we notice we will see a café on the right side of the entry.

To sum up

, we could say that they will add more places for other

sports

like dance, but all of that will replace the outdoor zone.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development?

In some counties young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies

Some people say that feeling of competition should be encouraged in children others say they should be taught to become cooperative. What is your opinion?

In today's world, the pressure of modern life negatively impacting family life. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that traditional gender roles are important for maintaining social order, while others argue that they restrict personal freedom and perpetuate inequality. Discuss both views.