It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Making distinguish between wrong and right is an essential task that

children

have to learn.

While

some argue that

punishment

is a practical way to teach them how to behave properly. I think that it may result in negative outcomes, and believe

teachers

and

parents

are better to apply some restrictions for

children

rather than

punishment

.

Although

some may believe that

punishment

is time efficient way of teaching

children

and

parents

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its results soon, it may lead to negative consequences.

Children

will be familiar with aggressive

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and imitate their

parents

, applying it in their relationships with friends or even

their

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next generations.

Moreover

,

punishment

brings nothing but a sense of fear. Being under

this

pressure for a long time,

children

may lose their confidence. It is an undeniable fact that those who

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not enough confidence would not make progress either in their professional, or personal life. If

parents

or

teachers

want to punish

children

, I think it should not be physical

punishment

in any circumstances. In terms of

teachers

, they can apply some restrictions for

children

and ask them to do all their assignments and if they do not pay attention to discipline, remove their break time.

parents

also

can Deprive

children

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facilities. If

children

develop a bad manner,

parents

can restrict their access to video games or cell phones, discouraging them from

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. In conclusion, I believe

punishment

is not a rational

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for teaching

children

about the difference between moral and immoral activities as it may have reverse effects on their character. I think

parents

and

teachers

should apply gentle approaches to deter them from doing improper actions.