The bar charts below show the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph depicts the
amount
of electricity
generated and consumed by ten distinct countries in the year 2014. The unit of electricity
is calculated in billion kWh
. Overall
, it is evident that China tops the list for production as well as
consumption of power
whereas
, Korea is at the bottom.
Firstly
, China being
the number one country generated and utilized 5,398 billion Change the form of the verb
is
kWh
and 5322 billion KWh
of electricity
respectively. Secondly
, the US ranked second generating around 4000 kWh
and consuming 3866 kWh
of power
. Moreover
, Russia and Korea produced and consumed approximately the same amount
of electricity
.
Furthermore
, Japan and India produced approximately the same amount
of power
however
, India's utilization was less as compared to Japan. Next,
Canada, France, Brazil, and Germany generated around
a similar Change preposition
apply
amount
of power
. Nevertheless
, Germany utilized more amount
of power
than it actually produced.Submitted by rakshandahedawoo on
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