The bar charts below show the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts below show the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph depicts the
amount
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of
electricity
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generated and consumed by ten distinct countries in the year 2014. The unit of
electricity
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is calculated in billion
kWh
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.
Overall
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, it is evident that China tops the list for production
as well as
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consumption of
power
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whereas
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, Korea is at the bottom.
Firstly
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, China
being
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the number one country generated and utilized 5,398 billion
kWh
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and 5322 billion
KWh
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of
electricity
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respectively.
Secondly
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, the US ranked second generating around 4000
kWh
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and consuming 3866
kWh
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of
power
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.
Moreover
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, Russia and Korea produced and consumed approximately the same
amount
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of
electricity
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.
Furthermore
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, Japan and India produced approximately the same
amount
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of
power
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however
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, India's utilization was less as compared to Japan.
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Canada, France, Brazil, and Germany generated
around
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a similar
amount
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of
power
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.
Nevertheless
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, Germany utilized more
amount
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of
power
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than it actually produced.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, electricity, kwh, power with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • megawatt-hours (MWh)
  • top ten countries
  • comparison
  • leading producers/consumers
  • highest producers
  • similarities
  • differences
  • relationship
  • significant gap
  • global scenario
  • balance
  • imbalance
  • overview
  • highlighting
  • identify
  • discuss
  • mention
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