The Charts Below Show What UK Graduate And Postgraduate Students Who Did Not Go Into Full-Time Work Did After Leaving College In 2008 Summarise The Information By Selecting And Reporting The Main Features, And Make Comparisons Where Relevant.
The given charts demonstrate what UK graduate and postgraduate
students
did having left college in 2008 excluding permanent workers.
Overall
, both graduates and postgraduates had more tendency to go on with further
study and the voluntary worker was the least common similarly
.
Nearly 30000 students
who chose further
study had outnumbered significantly their counterparts. 17735 graduates went on to work part-time and the number of students
who did not get a job was nearly 1000 fewer than part-time workers. Voluntary work which reached 3500 was the least common destination among others
As was in graduates, postgraduates who went on with further
studies were the biggest and voluntary workers were the smallest groups reaching 2725 and 345 respectively. However
, more students
chose to work part-time rather than students
who were unemployed consisting of 2535 and 1615 subsequently
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