The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australian water consumption for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates information about the average Australian annual residential
water
consumption
in six selected cities for last
year. Meanwhile
the pie chart provides data about how Add a comma
,Meanwhile
water
was used in Australia
in 2014.
Overall
, the highest water
consumption
was in Perth, followed by Brisbane, Adelaide, Sydney, Melbourne and Canberra. In addition
, the largest water
user in Australia
in 2014 was Agriculture, followed by Households, water
supply for savage and drainage, electricity and gas supply, and last
were manufacturing, other industries and mining.
Looking into details, it is evident that the highest water
consumption
in Australia
was Perth with 300 kilolitres
per sector as an annual average. It is followed by Brisbane and Adelaide where the sector used 250 kilolitres
and 230 kilolitres
in a year on average. Moreover
, in Sydney water
consumed was 200 kilolitres
and the smallest water
consumption
for last
year was Melbourne and Canberra, about 150 kilolitres
and 130 kilolitres
respectively.
Furthermore
, the largest water
user in 2014 in Australia
was the Agriculture industry with a proportion of 67 %. The next water
usage was households (9%). It is followed by water
supply, sewage and drainage (7%) and water
used for electricity and gas supply (7%). The rest were used by manufacturing (4%), other industries (4%) and mining (2%).Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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