You ordered an item from an online store and it has arrived damaged Write a letter to the retailer to complain. In the letter: - Explain why you are unhappy - Request a refund - Make arrangements to return the damaged item

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Dear Sir or Madam, I recently ordered an air fryer ,unfortunately when opened it, I discovered that the handle of its cap is broken.l was very disappointed to see

this

because I had a plan for preparing food at the weekend. I assume it happened

due to

the cheap packaging of the product because it is not bubble wrapped

as well as

the box used was not hard enough.l am not satisfied with your service so please provide a refund. l request to arrange the return of the broken product . the product number is 20980088 and it was delivered on 18/06/2023.if you want to arrange pickup of the parcel from home please contact me at my email address. Please do it as soon as possible. Best regards, jagdeep Singh,

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

130 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

I am writing to express my disappointment
I regret to inform you that
I am dissatisfied with the item I received
The item arrived damaged
The product is in unsatisfactory condition
I expected better quality
I would like to request a refund
I kindly ask for your assistance in resolving this matter
I would appreciate it if you could provide instructions
I suggest arranging a pick-up service
I expect a prompt response and resolution
I hope for a satisfactory outcome

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You ordered an item from an online store and it has arrived damaged Write a letter to the retailer to complain. In the letter: - Explain why you are unhappy - Request a refund - Make arrangements to return the damaged item

Word Count

Space travel has been possible for some time. Some people think space tourism could be developed in the future which can help to develop countries' economies. To what extent do you think this is a positive or negative development ?

More and more people today are using computers and electronic devices to access information. Therefore there is no need to print books, magazines and newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

in many countries, more and more young people are leaving school and unable to find jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individual and society?give reasons and make some suggestions.

In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they shiuld only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.