The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in UK, divided into three categories, from 1995 – 2002.
As is presented in the
diagram
gives us information about cellphone calls in the UK with the total number of minutes in billions which are divided into 3 categories
: 1) Local – fixed line
; 2) National and international – fixed line
; 3) Mobiles (all calls), over a period
of 7 years between 1995-2002.
It is clear from the diagram
, that in 1995 these 3 categories
are presented with the least indicator such
as mobiles with over 3 per cent
, national and international – fixed line
as well as
over 37 per cent
, and it is obvious from the diagram
that these 2 categories
are the lowest indicators during these 7 years
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and the last
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suggest
these 2 Change the verb form
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grew up by this
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. Mobiles
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. The highest indicators during these years resides
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