You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant

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Dear Sir, I hope you are doing well. I am writing with respect to the dinner my team and I had at your restaurant today. Please allow me to introduce myself. My name is Kiran Singh. My team and I meet at your restaurant once every month after our monthly review meeting. I am writing to express my disappointment with the quality of the food. We met like usual yesterday and I am sorry to say that the food quality has degraded. Our usual order consists of fries and cheese spinach dip for appetizers. The Fries were too oily and the spinach dip quantity was too small for the price listed on the menu. As far as the main course is concerned, the pizza we ordered had little to no topping and the crust was too dry.

While

the quality of the meal was low, we had to wait 45 mins for the items to arrive. Our team loves the ambience of the restaurant and

hence

we frequent there. In order for us to visit your place again, it would be great if we get compensated for the meal yesterday. I hope you consider our feedback and do the needful. Yours faithfully, Kiran

Submitted by kiranjanarthan24 on Wed Jun 21 2023

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