The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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"The chart illustrates how much merchandise was delivered domestically across 4 specific means of transport from 1974 to 2002, measured in

million

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tonnes

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Overall

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, the quantity of products shipped via rail remained unchanged,

whereas

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those via the rest rose by varying degrees, with the most pronounced increase being seen in

pipeline

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the pipeline

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. It

also

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reported that road ended up as the delivery method with the most commodities. Looking first at the numbers transported

through

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Road and Water, the former commenced the period with around 70

million

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tonnes

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, which was 30

million

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tonnes

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more than the corresponding figure for the latter, at just shy of 40

million

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tonnes

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Thereafter

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, there was a moderate rise to just south of 100

million

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tonnes

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in the Road's data in 2002.

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change, but to a lesser extent, can be observed in the numbers of Water, growing to nearly 70

million

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tonnes

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at the end

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this

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period. Turning to the remaining methods, about 40

million

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tonnes

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of items were conveyed by Rail

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and levelled off from

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time onward. The number of goods delivered via Pipeline showed a drastic elevation from approximately 5 to over 20

million

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during the period."

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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tonnes with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

196 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Overview
Trend
Fluctuation
Peak
Trough
Increase
Decrease
Stability
Mode of transport
Quantity
Comparison
Goods
Transported
Significant
Noticeable
General trend
Time span

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