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The line graph shows the growth in the population of UK from 1971 to 2006 and projections until 2031. The pie chart shows the population of different nationalities in the UK in the year 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the growth in the population of UK from 1971 to 2006 and projections until 2031. The pie chart shows the population of different nationalities in the UK in the year 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart depicts the burgeon in the populace living in Britain between 1971 and 2006.
Moreover
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, it anticipates growth
further
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 up to the
year
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 2031. The pie diagram represents 4 distinct nationalities residing in the UK in the
year
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 2006. The number of citizens is calculated in millions.
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, it is evident that there is a gradual increase in the population of the UK to which England has majorly contributed.
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 the first graph in the
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 1971, the total count of British citizens was just above 55 million which plateaued for 5 more years. After 1976, the population observed consistent growth and reached around 60 million in the
year
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 2006.
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, it is predicted that the count will continue to surge by approximately 65 million in the
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 2031.
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,
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 the pie chart, the majority of the citizens dwell in England which comprises 83.8% of the total count. Scotland ranks second which constitutes 8.5% of the populace which is followed by Wales having 4.9% and
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 Northern Ireland at 2.8%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to, further".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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