The workplace is changing rapidly and many people can no longer rely on having one job there entire life. Describe the possible causes of this and suggest how this problem can be dealt with.
Nowadays, all workplaces switch quickly and many individuals are concerned about their working future
as a matter of fact
they can lose their job. So, in Add the comma(s)
, as a matter of fact,
this
essay
I will Add a comma
,essay
further
explore this
fascinating and thought-provoking issue.
On the one hand, it is definitely clear that today artificial intelligence can replace many workplaces. For instance
, salesmen, drivers, call workers and even some jobs
in the field of medicine. Apparently, it is frighteningly
. Change the word
frightening
As a result
, a lot of people will lose their jobs
and become unemployed. Hence
, anarchy may ensue. However
, AI can carry benefits. For example
, it can replace dangerous jobs
like astronauts. Moreover
, apart from all technologies which can replace human beings , it can happen that in the future society will not need specific jobs
. It will become unnecessary.
On the other hand
, in my view, it is clear all individuals will not lose their workplaces. To begin
with, all these technologies do not have souls and do not have personal opinions and perspectives on the world. Also
, they cannot think outside of the box and enchance
their capabilities in special aspects. Correct your spelling
enhance
In other words
, AI cannot replace for example
teachers
. It will not do it considering that Add the comma(s)
,teachers
teacher
should have a specific approach for every student because everyone is an individual. Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
Furthermore
, it evident
that all complicated Add a missing verb
is evident
jobs
will be very difficult to replace. For instance
, CEO or neurosurgeon.
To conclude
, it apparent
that our future is unstable and we cannot predict which type of job will be most appropriate and stable. Add a missing verb
is apparent
In contrast
, all complex jobs
which require creativity and soul will not be replaced because it
will be almost unreal.Correct pronoun usage
they
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