The chart below shows the proportion of income adults and children spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998.
The table provides a breakdown by selected people of those on 1) food; 2) electronic equipment; 3) music; 4) videos; in the UK in 1998.
It is clear from the table that women are rated as the most consumer by category 1) food; with 39 per
cent
, while
boys are rated as the least buyer by class 1) food; with 9 per cent
. In division 2) electronic equipment; the most purchaser with 23 per cent
belongs to children, while
the smallest one with 1 per cent
pertains to female. In section 3) music; the major shopper with 40 per cent
resides in girls, in comparison with the minor indicator with 5 per cent
resides 3 groups: adults, men, and women. In the last
division girls are rated as the biggest user with 18 per cent
, in comparison females are the smallest ones with 0.5 per cent
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